The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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Two

maps

given

Add the auxiliary verb

are given

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below detail a university a

sports

centre

at present and proposed changes to be made in future. Overall,

sports

Correct article usage

the sports

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centre

will be equipped with a number of new facilities in the future including a leisure pool,changing rooms,

sports

hall, cafe and dance studio while replacing

two

outdoor courts.

To begin

with, currently, a centrally located swimming pool is surrounded by a gym at North,changing room at West, seating at East and reception at South.There are

two

outdoor courts on either side of the

sports

centre

which will be replaced in the future. A number of new facilities are planned for the proposed new

centre

includes,including a leisure pool in the West,

two

dance studios in the East, one cafe and a

sports

shop in the South,

two

changing rooms in South East and South West and a new

sports

hall beyond the seating room. A new space will be added to the gym.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?