The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this ? What can be done to solve this problem?
The significant growth of consumer
products
manufacturing has led to more detrimental effects on the natural environment. I believe that there are several root causes and solutions to address Change the noun form
product
this
issue will be proposed.
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To begin
with, the consumerism culture of today’s society has caused more harm to wildlife habitats for two main reasons, including Linking Words
the
industrial emission from the production process and packaging Correct article usage
apply
waste
from Use synonyms
the goods disposal
. Wastes and pollutants discharged from the manufacturing process are unavoidable by-products. In fact, factory machines are generally powered by fossil fuels, Change to a genitive case
the disposal of the goods
the disposal of the good
for
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and for
this
reason, Linking Words
Correct your spelling
carbon dioxide
carbon-dioxide
will be released which might severely pollute the surrounding air. Correct your spelling
carbon dioxide
Furthermore
, product packaging assembled from plastic and paper needs a longer time to degrade naturally. Linking Words
As a result
, it could end up contaminating the oceans, rivers, Linking Words
lakes
, and what is even more dangerous is the fact that it could seriously endanger the inhabitants when the Correct word choice
and lakes
waste
is accidentally swallowed.
Several actions should be prompted in order to mitigate the problem. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the government should take a bold move to impose a stricter law on sustainable manufacturing Linking Words
process
and Fix the agreement mistake
processes
Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
waste management
waste-management
. To do so, the government can regulate the use of renewable energies to replace fossil fuels as well as encourage the utilization of low-energy-consumption machines. Correct your spelling
waste management
Secondly
, to reduce unnecessary Linking Words
waste
from product packaging, Use synonyms
the
consumer goods companies need to use an eco-friendly material which is considerably more compostable, Correct article usage
apply
for example
, packaging made from plant-based resources Linking Words
such
as corn and wheat straw.
To sum up, Linking Words
waste
caused by the production of consumer goods is unavoidable, Use synonyms
therefore
comprehensive actions from the government and companies are needed to alleviate the problems immediately in order to conserve and protect the natural environment.Linking Words
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