People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in

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world

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credit

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are one of the most vital items on the earth. After all, cash

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is being with life people easier and more convenient. In my view, the pros of

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override the cons. Currently,

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play a high role for humanity along with there are

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essential for humanity.

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make

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life more comfortable as well as citizens can buy something

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at the same time without leaving home.

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helps

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inhabitance save their important time, due to these humans should do other significant deals.

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, repayment many necessary things pass thanks to

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like payment of taxes and other legal fees through Government websites which are safe and convenient. On

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one hand, despite the advantages, there are

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disadvantages

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using

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as well. As a matter of fact, in 21 century where technology is developing, it is dangerous to have a

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. Because

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each year cybercrime becomes more popular along with

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on earth.

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one research group did

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.

As a result

, many call centres tried to convince citizens to share

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their personal information. Eventually, they extorted their money.

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have

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anti-hacker networks, which provide

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defense

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from hackers.

In other words

, today days individuals should care about their

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. In conclusion,

although

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have drawbacks

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even more. After all,

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is irreplaceable for society.