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Writing Samples
Band 8

You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to bring to your attention the fact that some
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members
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 are always trying to sabotage my
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 and career in the company . They always behave rudely and don't respond to my emails on time.
This
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 kind of attitude and behaviour is affecting my daily routine of
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 .
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 , My expectation of working in a friendly environment has vanished . Few
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 will always
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 in groups and don't want to discuss any details with the
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. I expect
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 to
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 in a
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 environment with open communication . They will respond in a timely manner.
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 to that ,
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members
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 need to be disciplined and Strict instructions should be passed to them by Senior management . I am advising you to talk with them along with the Hr department about their behaviour in general and reprimanded them about
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 . Looking forward to hearing from you . Your's Faithfully James Dull

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