You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employee. In your letter, - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you find it - Say how you felt after recovering it - Explain why it was important to you
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Yousra Ghoneim, and I am one
of your regular commuters in your reputable corporation. I am writing this
letter to express my deepest appreciation because of the assistance that I have received last
week from one
of your workers.
Let me share the whole story with you. I was travelling from Cairo to Tanta on Monday last
week. Unfortunately, I have
lost my backpack which Unnecessary verb
apply
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is
in
black in Correct your spelling
is
color
, and there were important certificates along with my laptop inside it. After I had told Change the spelling
colour
one
of your workers, whose name is Ms Cathy, that I missed my bag, she rushed to everyone asking for it until she found it.
Another thing I forgot to mention that
I was quite anxious and frustrated because the bag contains quintessential things for my study. Add a missing verb
is that
However
, I became grateful to
her efforts once I Change preposition
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informed
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was informed
that
my backpack was found.
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One
last
point I want to raise is explaining the importance of this
bag to me. Actually, there was
all my academic certificates which Change the verb form
were
is
essential for the master's degree. Without Ms Cathy's efforts, I could not have been happy.
I wish Change the verb form
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this
letter highlights how dedicated clerk
you have in your enterprise, I will surely use your bus network again, and I will recommend it to all my friends.
Faithfully,
Yousra GhoneimCorrect article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
