People think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace, other things that the true function of the university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the curse is useful to an employee. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of the university.

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contemporary world, education subject has gained
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remarkable attention, it has sparked many debates. Education is imparted through various universities. Some individual believes that college should produce graduates with
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and skills required for employment.
In contrast
, others think that it should focus only on knowledge. Personally, I'm in complete agreement with the
first
statement and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my
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view points
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To begin
with, the indispensable fact is that the vision of every university is to provide holistic development to pupils which should include all the domains of education
that is
cognitive, affective and psychomotor.
This
will ensure to build up all the attributes required for employment, which in turn helps them to be
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useful to citizens of
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the nation
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. Youths are the future of every country. The institutes should have
this
mission & create
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accordingly
. It is very well evidenced that
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colleges with clear goals
provides
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100% campus recruitment and in
turn
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makes
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them popular.
Subsequently
, it's observed that many universities are the pride of
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nation.
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Oxford University is the proud of U.K. International students
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admitted which again helps in the economic development of the country. To summarize, all the educational institution's basic objective is to create products with
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development, because everything revolves around the youngsters.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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