You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your personality say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to apply for a temporary
football
coaching job at the summer camp
next
year.
First
of all, I completed my master's from Charles Sturt University in Accounting and was captain of a
football
team at my university for two years where we won many state-level
football
events.
Therefore
, I am more interested in the
football
coaching job which is included in your summer camp for
next
year.
Secondly
, I am a very open-minded person who believes in equality and equal opportunities.
In addition
to it, I am friendly, physically active and mentally strong.
This
makes me a perfect candidate for selection.
Lastly
, I have over two years of coaching experience at Charles Sturt University but for
this
summer they are closed.
Moreover
, I have
also
worked in child care for one year,
hence
I am good at dealing with kids as well. Apart from it, I have strong communication skills and time management skills which were highly regarded by my previous employer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Aneel Karmani
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