Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two opinions about higher education. One part of people reason
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right
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university
students
can choose any subject,
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they want.
Second
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part insists that
students
should
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only these subjects
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they will use in the future
especially
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,especially
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science and technology. I am more close to the
last
suggestion.
However
, I think it is important to understand the benefits and disadvantages of each position, so I propose to discuss them in
this
essay. If says about
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opinion about a form of studies, it has one great advantage – the freedom of choice. The student has a right to learn his
favorite
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favourite
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disciplines, and in
this
case, studies will be for him more easy and
pleasant
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.
On the other hand
the student as usual a younger person, and at
this
age, he cannot understand what subject he is really needed and for
this
reason make a mistake in
this
choice.
For example
, future lawyers have huge kinds of law
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study – civil, tax, criminal and many others. And it is really hard to understand what kind you need. I agree that
students
should study subjects that will be useful in the future.
This
approach helps to
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the
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time and give
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understanding
about
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studies’ way
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. Another advantage
for
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this
way of education is to have
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plan
of
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the studying process.
For example
, potential engineers will understand that they practice physics, chemistry, math and other science. In
conclusion
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there is a rivalry between two opinions and each of them can pretend on a number of followers. Part of them
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agrees
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with
position
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the position
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that
students
should choose
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their favorite
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favorite
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favourite
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subjects. Most of them believe that every student needs to have
the
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a
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useful education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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