During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express my interest in the job positions we discussed during our travel journey from Spain to Italy. Actually, we met each other one week ago on the aeroplane hosted by Iberia airways, and,

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you helped me to lift my carry-on luggage and we started our conversation. You informed me that you are the owner of different restaurants, and you had some job vacancies

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as chef, sous-chef, waiter etc. Honestly, I am interested in the sous-chef position. I was working in

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position for three years now in a well-known Spanish restaurant that has one Micheline Star.

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, I completed my studies in the most prestigious culinary school in Spain and I believe that my educational background and previous experience in the preparation of dishes and the elaboration of flavours would make me a perfect fit for

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position. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Lara.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

157 words

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