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Both diagrams illustrate the present
plan
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of a house level and a recommended
plan
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for other types of construction work. The
first
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diagram provides the existing floor scheme which is divided by a long
hall
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into two big rooms. The entrance to the floor takes place through the entrance door and
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through the
stairs
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leading to the
hall
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. Under the
stairs
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, it is seen storage place, albeit in the
kitchen
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no storage. On the right side of the
hall
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, according to the
plan
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is situated a large
kitchen
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, and on the left side the spacious living room. The
second
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diagram proposes a new
plan
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with several changes. One of the changes it can be seen in the
kitchen
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is the
kitchen
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furniture being fixed. Another modification in the
plan
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is the
hall
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removal and including two internal doors leading to the living room.
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, the substantial difference can be noticed in that the entrance has no
stairs
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,
however
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, the
stairs
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are located near the living room. All in all both diagrams put in evidence two possible plans for a floor building, one which exists and one with some perspective enhancements that can be adjusted for some building work.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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