Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, the over

usage

of packing

materials

is one of

major

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environmental problems

to

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the earth. Some people think that

manufacturers

and supermarkets should work on how to reduce the

amount

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number

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of packaging

materials

, meanwhile, other people believe that

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individuals

indivisuals

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individuals

such

as customers should be responsible for not purchasing overly packaged commodities. On the one hand, it is true that in old times, there is no packaging

materials

used for fruits and vegetables till

plastic

materials

are invented by humans. Foods were stocked just as they are,

then

people just picked them for

purchasing

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. The

manufacturers

and

supermarlets

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supermarkets

started using the packing

materials

for their own profits, like protecting the

goods

from being spoiled and showing the

goods

nicely at the stores.

Also

, the

plastic

materials

are so convenient for them to pack in small amounts of fruits and vegetables which is attractive for small families. Now, the

usage

of

plastic

materials

impact

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some

of

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wild

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animals in danger. Since the

manufacturers

are taking a lot of advantages from the packaging material, they should know

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their

thier

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their

way sacrifices the sustainability of the planet earth.

On the other hand

, if each individual actively brings their own reusable shopping bag,

then

reduction

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a reduction

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of

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in

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plastic

bags

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usage

could be expected.

Furthermore

, once many customers feel that overly decorated

goods

are

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unnecessary

unneccesary

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unnecessary

and waste,

then

those

goods

will not be so attractive in the market,

then

the shop will eventually stop carrying those

goods

.

Therefore

I believe that customers' strong

mind

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can actually change the action of

manufacturers

. In conclusion,

although

there

are

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some

argument

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arguments

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who

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should be responsible for managing the

usage

of

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unnecessary

unneccesary

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unnecessary

packaging

materials

, I strongly believe that all

of

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manufacturers

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the manufacturers

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, stores, and

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individuals

indivisuals

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individuals

should focus on

this

environmental issue and actively work on their own in order to reduce the packaging

materials

.