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A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

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Dear John, I hope, you and your family are all well.I just listen you are interested to buy a house in my neighbourhood.
Moreover
, I have decided to leave
this
 range because of crime rate is increasing day by day in my home town.
To begin
 with,I must tell you about my neighbourhood,I strongly recommend you change your decision and refuse your plan to buy a house near me. As you know,I live in the same range for five years,
however
, their environment is not well these days.In my area these days rapidly increasing criminal activities.
Moreover
, I am planning to leave
this
 area as soon as possible. I am planning to go to another city where we can live peacefully and safely.My colleagues John live there he recommends me to shift there.If you want to stay with us we can buy a house there and leave happily. If I can tell you anything else,please call me. your best Gobinda Mudbhari
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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