Question: More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than in person (e.g. banking, shopping, hotel booking, etc.). Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people use the net to do their duties

instead

of

face to face

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. Activities

such

as booking, renting, shopping or medical care are going to be

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mentioned

mentionated

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mentioned

in

this

essay as

a different instances

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. I strongly believe that the advantages of

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technology outweigh the disadvantages. It is well known that society has

becoming

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more and more technologically

by

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over

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years

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the years

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. Tasks

such

as going shopping or receiving the wage by cheque or cash have changed to online shopping and online bank accounts.

However

, all these advances are not well-view by many elderly people, who sometimes are unable to keep up, because they

borned

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burned

born

in a century where every

currently

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advances were unknown. For

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instance

intance

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instance

, if senior citizens want to go to the pharma to pick up their medication, they will need

the

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national insurance card, in which the doctor had to put their personal receipt before,

to

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may buy their pills. Another example could be when they try to

retired

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their own money

for

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from

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the bank due to often they could not do it by themselves, feeling like a burden.

Nevertheless

, there exist a lot of advantages of doing

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tasks using the internet rather than in person. The net is the

most fast

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fastest

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communication system that we have

never

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ever

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know

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. It

is allows

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allows

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the population to do their duties faster than some years ago.

In addition

,

internet

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the internet

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is so safe and if you have any problem

on

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with

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it,

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professional

proffesional

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professional

workers could find it in a few seconds.

For instance

, if a hacker has

stole

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your identity, your bank can

blocked

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your account and track your money to keep it safe. To conclude, I firmly think that the advantages of

internet

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the internet

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outweigh the disadvantages.

Although

elderly people have some little difficulties with it,

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technology

have

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changed our view of life.