Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There have been arguments about studying lessons whether they want or what universities
provided
. One side believes every subject can be used in the future, Wrong verb form
provide
while
another one disagrees because of having not enough time to spare. In this
essay, I will discuss and give opinions on both sides.
Some believe that high-qualified
professionals, Correct your spelling
highly qualified
such
as surgeons, doctors, engineers, etc., need deeper knowledge and for
this
reason, they should be required to learn the main subjects related to their majors. For example
, students who will be surgeons in the future should be allowed to study medical fields and provide more practical training due to
not having a chance to risk others' lives. In this
matter, I agree with the idea of
having deeper education in the field will be more useful for their jobs and the public.
Change preposition
that
On the other hand
, others claim to study whatever they desire is essential for them owing to having broader knowledge while
they are educating. For instance
, if engineers do not know any finances and investments, they tend to have difficulties managing their finance
, namely monthly income and household expenses. Fix the agreement mistake
finances
However
, we need a wider thing to know after graduating from university, which is why there are professional institutions to handle these situations.
In conclusion, there are two sides arguing about whether students should be allowed to study subjects whether they like or they are given. Although
they need a wide range of knowledge when they started
working, more time is needed to be fully educated professionalsWrong verb form
start
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Task Response
Your essay does not fully address the task and lacks a clear position on the issue. You need to clearly present both perspectives and give a well-structured opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
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