Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • Thank them for the photos and for the holiday • Explain why you didn’t write earlier • Invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear John, I hope my letter finds you well and in good health. I have received the pictures sent
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you and thank you for inviting me on
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short vacation. You can't believe that I got so busy in
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life that I almost lost contact with all of my friends and
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vacation got everything back. Now, I am feeling so relaxed and energetic. After returning from
this
short trip I was so productive in my office, and fortunately, they promoted me to the senior level which I have been trying for the
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, I didn't get time to write to you earlier. As you know Diwali is approaching so I think we all have a long weekend, let's make a plan to meet again. I would like you all to come to my place and I am sure you'll enjoy it here. Looking forward to seeing you. All the best. Regards, Shikha
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