1. You are leaving your current job for some reasons and you would like to recommend one of your friends to your manager. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - say why you resign - what are the duties of your current job - why your friend is suitable for this job

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Smith, I am writing to resign

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current job as

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in the Research &

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GE corporation. I decide to obtain a doctorate degree in Canada, as I recognize that I would like to focus on the new drug design in the field of diabetes. I believe that my current posting is extremely rewarding.

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job requires me to read a variety of research papers and help in conducting relevant experiments in the laboratory. I would like to

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one of my

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, Jane to fill

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vacancy. Jane

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majors in biology as I do, and she got a

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degree in molecular biology. She is currently working as a technician at

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Institution of King's University. She is

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experiments. She is planning to take a job out of

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academia.

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, she would be a qualified candidate. She would be available for an interview

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week. I appreciate that I had great times while working in

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matter. Kind regards, Ada Ye

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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resignation
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career advancement
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key responsibilities
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professional demeanor
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