1. You are leaving your current job for some reasons and you would like to recommend one of your friends to your manager. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - say why you resign - what are the duties of your current job - why your friend is suitable for this job

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Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am writing to resign

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from the

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the

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current job as

technician

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in the Research &

Revelopment

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Development

department

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GE corporation. I decide to obtain a doctorate degree in Canada, as I recognize that I would like to focus on the new drug design in the field of diabetes. I believe that my current posting is extremely rewarding.

This

job requires me to read a variety of research papers and help in conducting relevant experiments in the laboratory. I would like to

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recommend

recomment

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recommend

one of my

friend

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, Jane to fill

for

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this

vacancy. Jane

also

majors in biology as I do, and she got a

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mater

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degree in molecular biology. She is currently working as a technician at

Cancer

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Institution of King's University. She is

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experienced

exprienced

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with literature reading and performing

biologic

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experiments. She is planning to take a job out of

the

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academia.

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, she would be a qualified candidate. She would be available for an interview

week. I appreciate that I had great times while working in

this

department. Thank you for

you

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time

into

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matter. Kind regards, Ada Ye

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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resignation
gratitude
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relocation
key responsibilities
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professional demeanor
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1. You are leaving your current job for some reasons and you would like to recommend one of your friends to your manager. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - say why you resign - what are the duties of your current job - why your friend is suitable for this job

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, many people have focused on the negative effects advertising has on children’s health, behaviour and family relationships. Advertising to children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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