The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

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caused by young adults
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drastically rising in several nations.
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on the account of multiple reasons which I will depict in
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video games
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making them commit many sins. Because
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of the boys would love to play racing games on the account of
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car the young ones try to imitate the games and
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accidents.
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dead the video footage visualize that it happened because they try to do drag racing
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highway. Unexpectedly, one of the
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was under 18 years
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old. Since toddlers behave like they are
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reality
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increasing crime.
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mainly
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their job yet all the stunt scenes are done with the safety and support from the crew before performing
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and all the time
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used are not
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and certain computer
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are used to modify the action sequences. Unfortunately, a set of teenagers find it real and try to perform the act in the society from the movies which they watched paves
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towards social problems and
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he might be sentenced to several legal
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movie Ayan in which the hero smuggled
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from Africa a person tried to imitate the same,
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he tried it with brown sugar
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, he was caught. People find illegal exports as
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money making
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options by watching films and
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it in real life which is another factor. The solution for
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educating
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individuals about the reality of life and the virtual life
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parents and teachers will help to solve the problem to
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certain
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. To conclude, visual communication
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are the major cause
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the problems happening in most
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the countries
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