The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

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drastically rising in several nations.

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video games

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making them commit many sins. Because

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of the boys would love to play racing games on the account of

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when they get their

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car the young ones try to imitate the games and

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accidents.

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dead the video footage visualize that it happened because they try to do drag racing

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highway. Unexpectedly, one of the

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was under 18 years

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old. Since toddlers behave like they are

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for

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increasing crime.

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, youngsters these days are found interested

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their job yet all the stunt scenes are done with the safety and support from the crew before performing

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and all the time

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used are not

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and certain computer

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are used to modify the action sequences. Unfortunately, a set of teenagers find it real and try to perform the act in the society from the movies which they watched paves

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towards social problems and

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he might be sentenced to several legal

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movie Ayan in which the hero smuggled

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from Africa a person tried to imitate the same,

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, he was caught. People find illegal exports as

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money making

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options by watching films and

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it in real life which is another factor. The solution for

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educating

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individuals about the reality of life and the virtual life

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parents and teachers will help to solve the problem to

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certain

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. To conclude, visual communication

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are the major cause

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the problems happening in most

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the countries