You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazins for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter -explain why you would like the job -Give details why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing in reference to the recent job advertisement in People magazine and I am looking for
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an opportunity. I recently relocated and as a
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I appreciate any opportunity to assimilate into the Australian culture and be with a local family, and having the chance to work with you and live in your house will fulfil that. I got my bachelor's degree in psychology and I did quite a lot of research within the field of children's upbringing in terms of physical and psychological aspects.
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, I published a paper
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of my research.
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, I believe I have the particularities needed for
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job
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as patience, kindness, and diligence. To be completely honest, I have a curious personality, so I mostly spend my leisure time reading, researching and visiting cultural landmarks of Australia. Considering my characteristics, I assure you that I will fit in well in
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job and with your family. I look forward to hearing from you and for purposes of quick contact, a reply by telephone would be appreciated. Best regards, Shima Oveysi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
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  • even though
  • despite

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