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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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It is an undeniable fact that
,
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" currently
women
 are leaving
men
 behind in every field in society. Owing to
this
 , at present more males are not often doing jobs they are taking care of their children at home
instead
 whereas
women
 are busy with their jobs .
This
 essay intends to enumerate some comparing reasons behind
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ever increasing
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 trend and will
also
 enunciate its positive and negative aspects before deriving a meaningful conclusion . To commence with , there are considerable reasons
that
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why
men
 are staying at home to look after their children and
women
 are doing
full time
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 jobs . The most prominent one in
this
 regard is that
women
 are having
better
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degree
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 than
men
 . To elaborate
it
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,
as
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it is a fact that
women
 are good at academics than
men
 . So , they have a degree from
reputated
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reputed
 colleges and get
job
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 easily with handsome
salary
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. Resultantly, family expenditures are catered easily .  On the positive side , there are various merits when a
women
 work . The most pertinent one which can be affixed in
this
 regard is that it helps in the overall development of a province . To be more specific, when
women
works
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 it
reduce
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 the discrimination
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 the inhabitants
in
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 society.
This
a
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nation develops in every
aspects
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. Despite the above mention benefits , the drawbacks of
this
 phenomenon can not be ignored . The most underlying risk is that it
give
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 rise to various social crimes . Categorically discussing , when a
women
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woman
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 works in
office
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over time
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 and
comes
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 home late
night
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 . She
become
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 the victim of various crimes like rape , sexual harassment
etectra
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etcetera
. Ergo , crime against
women
 increases in society. To recapitulate, females work nowadays for distinct reasons and help in the overall development of
country
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 whereas the drawbacks of it cannot be overlooked .
Thus
 if woman work they must have the courage to fight the problems that can come anytime
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