development in Industrial area in the town of Norbiton

The two maps show the current infrastructure and
future
development in the
town
of
Norbiton
. Overall, what stands out in the
future
map is that in
future
the
Norbiton
town
will be more modern than it is today. Looking at the details,
currently
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the
town
of
Norbiton
is completely industrial with farmland in the north. One major
road
is on the south
end
of the
town
, while a roundabout and a
road
is passing through the middle of the
town
and there are factories on both sides of that
road
. In
future
, the
town
will be completely changed and turned into a modern
town
. All the factories will be knocked down and
instead
of factories houses will be built along the
road
.
Road
infrastructure
also
increased to the north
end
of the
town
along with housing schemes. At the west
end
of the
town
, shops will be built along with housing and a
road
. In the northeast
end
of the
town
, a new playground will be constructed with 2 housing blocks. In the east of the
town
, a new school will be constructed that will be connected to the centre of the
town
by
road
. A new medical centre will be developed in the centre of the
town
. In
future
, The bridge will
also
be constructed on the river at the north
end
of
Norbiton
.
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