Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Why

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should be considered dangerous? Most

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adult

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people

are those who are against computer

games

or violence on television, in spite of young

people

are

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used to

this

type of technology,

but

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not all is good.

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adults

used to play in a different way,

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with us, two decades ago there are no cellphones, even around 80's started appearing the

first

televisions, that's why

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adults

used to play traditional

games

,

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marbles, with the "trompo" and they played hide and seek. So, when things advanced fast they couldn't understand many things, but they tried to adapt themselves, there's the problem

,

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since

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young

people

understand changes faster than

adults

.

Furthermore

, companies, which develop apps or programs, took advantage of the situation advancing faster than

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past years, until appeared the smartphone, with a touch screen, in order to

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and programs

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more interactive

games

. That's how young

people

were hooked and started the discussion, due to parents controlled more

them

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and

saw

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the type of

games

that they play, In conclusion, the game

don't

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define

the

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children

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or young man

behavior

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, because as we are humans we know how

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reality from virtual

games

and

also

we can think

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about what

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is correct or incorrect, so

adults

emphasize when some children have mental problems thinking that the game was the reason, but that's not true.