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You are organising a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter, • give details of the seminar • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • say what the presentation should be about

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Dear Femi, My name is Simeon Agbanoma your fellow colleague from the sales department at Zeta-Web Nigeria Limited. I am writing to discuss the forthcoming OEM seminar as I am the pioneer. My department is planning on hosting a seminar for all our clients in order to pitch our products to CIOs, IT managers and all relevant folks in our targeted leads.
This
 would help skyrocket our projections because it will aid in familiarizing them with our
solutions
 which is a great way to start a new sales year. We are inviting you and the whole technical department to grace the seminar.
Also
, we would like you to prepare a detailed presentation about all our
solutions
. Going forward, your expertise is very much needed because you have a solid understanding of all these
solutions
 and your team is in the best place to help explain to our attendees while we do the pitching. The presentation should contain a detailed analysis of
solutions
such
 as CISCO security products, Juniper Switches and other OEM products as well as their functionalities and competitive advantages.
Lastly
, you can
also
 prepare a comparison table of existing
solutions
, costs, licensing and others. I would appreciate your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Simeon.
Submitted by simeonagbanoma on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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