You are organising a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter, • give details of the seminar • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • say what the presentation should be about

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Dear Femi, My name is Simeon Agbanoma your fellow colleague from the sales department at Zeta-Web Nigeria Limited. I am writing to discuss the forthcoming OEM seminar as I am the pioneer. My department is planning on hosting a seminar for all our clients in order to pitch our products to CIOs, IT managers and all relevant folks in our targeted leads.

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would help skyrocket our projections because it will aid in familiarizing them with our

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which is a great way to start a new sales year. We are inviting you and the whole technical department to grace the seminar.

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, we would like you to prepare a detailed presentation about all our

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. Going forward, your expertise is very much needed because you have a solid understanding of all these

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and your team is in the best place to help explain to our attendees while we do the pitching. The presentation should contain a detailed analysis of

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such

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as CISCO security products, Juniper Switches and other OEM products as well as their functionalities and competitive advantages.

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, you can

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prepare a comparison table of existing

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, costs, licensing and others. I would appreciate your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Simeon.

simeonagbanomaTue Oct 25 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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