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Write a letter to your manager complaining about parking situation at work. In your letter, you should: describe the problems are explain why should solve the problems suggest how to solve the problems.

#manager #situation #work
Dear Joe I am writing to seek
for
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your help in order to tackle the problems regarding the parking issues. Nowadays our company hired
over
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thousands
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of employee
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employee
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 and they are all working in
this
 building.
However
, the parking area around
this
 building is limited.
As a result
, most workers, including me, find it difficult to find a place and
park
 their cars in the morning. Actually, some people have to
park
 in the car
park
 at the building beside us and
then
 walk to our building. Nowadays our company hired
over
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thousands
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of employee
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employee
Fix the agreement mistake
employees
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 and they are all working in
this
 building.
However
, the parking area around
this
 building is limited.
As a result
, most workers, including me, find it difficult to find a place and
park
 their cars in the morning. Actually, some people have to
park
 in the car
park
 at the building beside us and
then
 walk to our building.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parking conflicts
  • insufficient parking
  • limited parking spaces
  • tardiness
  • security concerns
  • vehicle safety
  • workplace morale
  • employee satisfaction
  • rotating parking schedule
  • feasible solutions
  • remote parking location
  • carpool system
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