Consumer behaviour has changed considerably in recent years due to technology. In what ways does technology affect consumer activities such as shopping? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technology has changed
as a result
human behaviour has changed. The merits of this
field outweigh the demerits.
In these times, people
that have the internet
are getting lasy
. Correct your spelling
lazy
In other words
, the population have everything in
the Change preposition
on
internet
so they do not even have to go to shop
to do shopping. They have everything without going out. Add an article
the shop
a shop
For example
, in Poland
there is Add a comma
,Poland
the
company named Pyszne pl that delivers Correct article usage
a
you
food and groceries for a low price. In our country, humanity Correct pronoun usage
apply
do
not have activities Change the verb form
does
in
work.Change preposition
at
for instance
, there is an increasing trend of working online at home. So this
forcing
you to stay in Replace the word
forces
house
and do nothing, only sitting and working. It might have Add an article
the house
effect
on obesity in our Add an article
an effect
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country
century
centry
due to low activity.
In spite of the fact thatCorrect your spelling
century
,
it might have some demerits, it has lots of advantages. In our Remove the comma
apply
generation
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,generation
people
work very hard and they can not have balance
between family and work. Add an article
a balance
People
can order food or clothes in
the Change preposition
on
internet
so they will not waste time to go
to Change the verb form
going
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a restaurant
restaurant
or Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
gallery
. Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
For example
, my whole family buy things at
the Change preposition
on
internet
so they do not waste time on such
things. For another
advantage isChange preposition
Another
,
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apply
government
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a government
the government
which
can help their citizen. Due to considerably Correct pronoun usage
it
change
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changes
of
technology Change preposition
in
government
and companies improve their services Fix the agreement mistake
governments
that
applications will be Correct word choice
and
simply
and useful for everybody. Many Replace the word
simple
people
say that,
companies follow our move Remove the comma
apply
at
the Change preposition
on
internet
and commission their workers to improve services.
In conclusion, even though technology change
and due to Add a missing verb
has change
this
fact people
getting overweight and getting lasy
it Correct your spelling
lazy
have
more benefits in Change the verb form
has
this
field such
as having more time and improving our life.Submitted by bandrowskaagnieszka1 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...