Consumer behaviour has changed considerably in recent years due to technology. In what ways does technology affect consumer activities such as shopping? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, technology has changed
as a result
human behaviour has changed. The merits of
this
field outweigh the demerits. In these times,
people
that have the
internet
are getting
lasy
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lazy
.
In other words
, the population have everything
in
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the
internet
so they do not even have to go to
shop
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the shop
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to do shopping. They have everything without going out.
For example
, in
Poland
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,Poland
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there is
the
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a
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company named Pyszne pl that delivers
you
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apply
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food and groceries for a low price. In our country, humanity
do
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not have activities
in
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at
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work.
for instance
, there is an increasing trend of working online at home. So
this
forcing
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you to stay in
house
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the house
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and do nothing, only sitting and working. It might have
effect
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an effect
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on obesity in our
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country
century
centry
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century
due to low activity. In spite of the fact that
,
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it might have some demerits, it has lots of advantages. In our
generation
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people
work very hard and they can not have
balance
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a balance
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between family and work.
People
can order food or clothes
in
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on
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the
internet
so they will not waste time
to go
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going
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to
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a restaurant
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restaurant
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restaurants
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or
gallery
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galleries
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.
For example
, my whole family buy things
at
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on
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the
internet
so they do not waste time on
such
things.
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advantage is
,
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government
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a government
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which
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it
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can help their citizen. Due to considerably
change
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changes
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of
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in
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technology
government
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governments
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and companies improve their services
that
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and
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applications will be
simply
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simple
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and useful for everybody. Many
people
say that
,
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companies follow our move
at
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on
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the
internet
and commission their workers to improve services. In conclusion, even though technology
change
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has change
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and due to
this
fact
people
getting overweight and getting
lasy
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lazy
it
have
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has
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more benefits in
this
field
such
as having more time and improving our life.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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