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Some people like to work in a company which offers high salary. Some others think that it is good to work in a company which offers a good working atmosphere. What is your opinion? Discuss both the views with examples.

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Some masses adore working in an organisation which provided an ample amount of income but
further
 believe that the
environment
 of the industry is a better choice. In my ,thoughts I think the working
environment
 is much preferable to a good
salary
.
This
 essay discusses both views with valid examples.
To Begin
 with, handsome pay will offer a better lifestyle and feel. Individuals can get desirable things in his/her life. But, a good
salary
 can not be able to provide peace of mind if our surroundings are not positive.
In addition
 to that, the Experience of
work
 will become worse.
For example
, if someone facing harassment by a senior manager
then
 it is impossible to stay and
work
 in a company.
Although
, some employees
work
 in
such
 conditions knowing the consequences, after some time they suffer from tension and stress.
On the other hand
, a better
environment
 in workplaces makes
work
 easy and peaceful. It
also
 increases the quality of
work
.
Also
, if someone feels stuck in a project or
work
then
 a senior will help with their experience and knowledge which
also
 increases the skills of an individual person.
For example
, a study shows that if an employee works in calm conditions
then
 new skills are inherited from their mind.
Also
, these people become much more successful in future with an increment in
salary
 and post. To conclude, It is true a higher
salary
 provides good life but if someone wants consistency in a career
then
 the calm
environment
 can give both a better future and ample income.
Submitted by mehtab300 on

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