You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, My name is Gurmit Singh. Recently, I read about a one-week walking mountains tour of Shimla in a magazine. I am fond of exploring new places,

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, I can get an opportunity to discover new things which will help me to enhance my knowledge. Due to the fact that

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I am a student at Delhi University,

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, I will be glad if you share the dates and cost of the trip with me, so that, I will make plans and arrange the money

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within the scheduled time. I would like to tell you that because of drastically changes in the weather I am feeling a little uncomfortable with my health for the

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week. But I hope it will not be an obstacle in my hills visit plan. Kindly provide me required information as soon as possible. I am looking forward to your prompt reply. Yours faithfully

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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6 paragraphs

159 words

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