You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done
Dear
Mr.
John,
I am writing Change the punctuation
Mr
this
letter to complain regarding the hotel where you booked our recent conference.
A couple of weeks back, I requested you to schedule a meeting with our top 50 clients at IBIS hotel. Accordingly
, you have fulfilled it and we had our conerence
on October 20th in that conference hall.
We had faced multiple problems Correct your spelling
conference
such
as the projector was not in a
working condition and there was a persistent noise from the AC vent. Correct article usage
apply
Although
, both the
issues were addressed after Correct article usage
apply
couple
of hours, we went 2 hours behind Change the article
a couple
the
Correct article usage
apply
scheduled
. Replace the word
schedule
Consequently
, half of the clients had to leave in the middle of it. I am utterly disappointed with the arrangement as there were
nobody from your team to look Change the verb form
was
in to
these issues at least a day ahead of Join the words
into
this
critical meeting.
I would need you to take these issues in to
consideration while you Join the words
into
Correct your spelling
organize
oragnize
any Correct your spelling
organise
such
events going forward. Otherwise
, this
will have serious
impact Add an article
a serious
to
your credibility as it's a matter of our organisation's reputation that was put at risk.
Yours sincerely,
Prudhvi PinnintiChange preposition
on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- however
- although
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