You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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Dear

Mr.

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John, I am writing

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letter to complain regarding the hotel where you booked our recent conference. A couple of weeks back, I requested you to schedule a meeting with our top 50 clients at IBIS hotel.

Accordingly

, you have fulfilled it and we had our

conerence

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conference

on October 20th in that conference hall. We had faced multiple problems

such

as the projector was not in

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working condition and there was a persistent noise from the AC vent.

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, both

the

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issues were addressed after

couple

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of hours, we went 2 hours behind

the

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scheduled

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Consequently

, half of the clients had to leave in the middle of it. I am utterly disappointed with the arrangement as there

were

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nobody from your team to look

in to

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these issues at least a day ahead of

this

critical meeting. I would need you to take these issues

in to

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consideration while you

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organize

oragnize

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organise

any

such

events going forward.

Otherwise

this

will have

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your credibility as it's a matter of our organisation's reputation that was put at risk. Yours sincerely, Prudhvi Pinninti

Submitted by prudhvi.pinninti18 on Wed Oct 26 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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