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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and city closing do you agree or disagree?

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The pie chart shows the percentage of people who tend to take food away in Canada, and the bar chart provides information about the number of Indian restaurants between 1960 and 2015. Overall, the total figure for Indian food shops exhibited an upward trend over the period given.
Moreover
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, Chinese people and those from India are more likely to eat elsewhere
instead
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 of in the food shop, whereas the proportion of Thais, Greeks and Mexicans contribute to the lowest sectors for takeouts in
this
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 country. 

In terms of favourite takeaways, the Chinese make up the largest segment, which took the lead at 34%. Indians are ranked
second
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, 8% apart (26%) from the percentage ranked
first
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. Italian and Persian, at one-tenth and at 9%, respectively. It is worth noting that those populations who come in
last
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 are only at 1%. 

In 1960, the number of Indian restaurants was less than 1000 and went up significantly to over eight times after 4 decades,
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 saw a slight increase to about 9000 in 2007 before remaining the same after the
further
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 years.
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