The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pictures illustrate the future plan of the Norbiton industrial areas that are going to expand. Over a time period, the industrial
area
will be completely replaced by a residential
area
. The factories will demolish and new buildings
such
as social amenities will be built in the
area
. It is clearly observed that the main roundabout will be kept at the centre of the
area
.
However
, a new square will be built in place of the T-junction to the south of the map. If you follow the map you can find in the north of the main square there will be built a new bridge to pass the river and reach the farmland. What expect from a residential
area
is that need places to support people for all kinds of needs so some old factories will be replaced by schools and playgrounds and
also
medical centres and shops the
last
two items are located in the corner of the roundabout. New roads are going to build plus new buildings it is very close to attache the town.
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