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Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only leads to believe graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Education is one of the most
people
 care about. Many
people
 think that a large proportion of young
students
 going to
university
 will bring many benefits to the country.
However
, some
people
 do not think so, they believe that college
students
 only cause the unemployment rate to increase. In my opinion, I agree with the
first
 point more than the
second
 point. These days, there are some
people
 who think that going to
university
 does not have so many benefits. They have to spend four years or more studying the profession they will do in the future. But when they learn half of the program, they get bored and do not like that major and they have to start a new one from the beginning.
This
 leads to a waste of time and leaves employees in
businesses
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. Young
people
 can be pressured to have a bachelor’s degree even though it is not important. Studying and doing the wrong job will make
people
 feel unconfident and bored quickly.
On the other hand
, I still believe that well-educated
people
 influence society positively. Study programs expose
people
 to things they could not have known before and prepare them with the best knowledge for the workplace. It helps
university
students
 to find high-quality jobs. It is a proven fact that intelligent
people
 can bring more economic development than physical workers. Developing the level of education will lead to national growth more and more in many ways.
For example
, young
students
 in medical universities will learn and research many different fields, from which they will create and constantly develop medicine and bring to market the best drug innovations. In conclusion, studying at
university
 is not the only road to success, but it will be the way to help the country find and train many talents to help the country’s development.
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