Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
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environment
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the environment
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is the most important problem
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entire
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world. In my opinion, tackling
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environment
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environmental
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issues
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shouldn’t be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government
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the
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problems of any country are similar, the reasons
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these
issues
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are different.
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, every
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countries
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need to confront and solve their problem. The priority of solving
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issues
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in any country
are
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not the same.
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, In
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development
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countries
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, their priority is reducing air pollution
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due to industrial activities. Urgent
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issues
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in every
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countries
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actually are closely related. For
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reason,
coordination
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of actions by
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is very essential. Rich
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should support
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financial and technology
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other poor
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in facing
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problems. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the opinion that solving
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environmental
environment
enviroment
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environmental
problems should be the responsibility of international
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rather than each national government. It must be the duty of all people living on
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Earth to protect our planet.
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