Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this ? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
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essay, discuss what might be the reasons and explain both the pros and cons.
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. Secondly
, Many masses think they don't want to leave their family Correct your spelling
alone
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.
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, some advantages to live
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financial
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contrary
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probably
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probably
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alone
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without family Correct your spelling
alone
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makes
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independent
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independent
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opportunity
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opportunities
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a new
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conclusion
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, there are both merits as well as demerits of living close to Correct your spelling
conclusion
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the birth
birth
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birthplace
place
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