Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people suppose that solving green
issues
should be the obligation of a transnational organization rather than each domestic government. I somewhat disagree with
this
opinion because resolving environmental
problems
is
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responsible
for
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each other country;
however
, tackling environmental
issues
belong to the responsibility of a global organization. All nation-states global must resolve to own their environmental
problems
.
Although
dealing with environmental
problems
of
countries
is similar, the reasons leading to
this
has different. For
this
reason, it is necessary for each nation to handle its own
issues
. Priority
taclking
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tackling
talking
environmental
problems
of each country all over the world have
also
differences.
For example
, reducing air pollution from industrial activities has been prioritized by developing
countries
in the world.
On the other hand
,
the
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international organizations
also
have to find ways to protect the environment. Environmental
problems
related to each other's
countries
.
Therefore
, cooperation to develop the nation in the world
which
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has really necessary activities for general development. Developed
countries
should support financially and technologically for least developed nation-states and developing
countries
in dealing with environmental
issues
.
For instance
, some developed
countries
such
as Germany could share their solution for environmental
problems
for others to grow together. In conclusion,
i
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believe that handling these environmental
problems
are
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not a mission for only international;
instead
, responsibilities should be divided equally among international organization and national government.
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