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The world of work is changing so fast that employees cannot depend on having the same job or working conditions. What are possible causes for the rapid change and what suggestion could be given for preparing people.

#world #work #employees #job #conditions #change #suggestion #people
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first
 step is important to contemplate the way why the actual humans gain money because is not only through an employer and
that is
 a cause of the internet expansion and technological evolution
also
 the easy access to
information
 free and
variety
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 of income ways,
this
 is how the type of work what in the past doesn'
t
 exist lie influencer, YouTuber and so on, generates the best incomes for that new employees,
this
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t
 was too advanced and the human being can'
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have access a
lot
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information
then
 actually. Today
an
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only video can show to millions of people and generate millions of dollars
to
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 the creator through the
pay
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 of the biggest
companies
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 advertising. From my point of
view
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 the best way to prepare the new generations of employees are
create
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 new student program
what
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 consider new ways of
learn
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,
for
example
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 University programs without mathematics in their syllabus because many of
the
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them
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 actually works don'
t
 need that in the training for new skills what the new generation needs.
As
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conclusion
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, I think the best option for the new employees
is teach
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 them how
create
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 a tech revolution
what
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which
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increase
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the
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apply
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access
acces
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access
 to free and quality
information
also
 the expansion of the
world
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world's
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 internet networks
allow
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allows
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them to
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to
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the
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apply
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actually
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work force
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workforce
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grow
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to grow
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her
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their
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 skills in the new
information
 world.
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