Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Due to technological advances, humans have opted for various alternatives to stay in touch with their family and
friends
. Nowadays, many people
prefer to have conversations through communication
channels such
as email and messengers rather than meeting up and this
has led to various problems in community life. I would disagree with the notion completely and state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Advances in automation is
incredible which Change the verb form
are
people
in the past never dreamt of. There are various advantages associated with this
. Firstly
, the ease that communication
have
broughtChange the verb form
has
,
has helped Remove the comma
apply
people
in saving their time, humans can communicate from the comfort of their homes, and they can also
perform various things at the same time. On the other hand
, traffic congestion, air pollution and noise pollution can be reduced because less frequently people
meet their friends
. Furthermore
, it has enabled to continue friendships among people
who live across the world.
Nevertheless
, it is also
true that changes in communication
channels have led to various disadvantages. To begin
with, the relationships that existed in the past were pure and caring, they also
involved better understanding, whereas now, there is less understanding, bonding and care between friends
. Secondly
, it has also
impacted human's
healthy routine, Change noun form
human
people
often stepped out of their homes in order to meet their friends
but nowadays, due to the ease of communication
, people
rarely go out and this
has resulted in various health issues such
as obesity, heart problems and blood pressure. Moreover
, it has also
made humans lazy.
In my opinion, the advantages of using these media outweigh the disadvantages. People
should understand how to make well use of these communication
media. Friends
who live across the neighbourhood should meet face to face, it also
keeps them healthy, but if a friend resides too far then
it is better to email or message them, so this
way, we can reduce traffic and other pollution.
To conclude, I would argue that, proper education should be implemented on how to use various technologies and when to limit them in order to tackle these issues.Submitted by simmirodrigues1994 on
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