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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the living standards of urban
society
 have been steadily increasing over the
last
 few decades.
However
, when it comes to the most fundamental social welfare,
the
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complimentary
healthcare
, remains
as
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a frequently debated issue. For the sake of the
aging
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 demographics and the expanding gap between rich and poor, I believe it is crucial for the
government
 to do its part to ensure that every individual is able to have access to that
healthcare
 at no extra cost. According to
the
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recent
demographics
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 statistics, the population of seniors has
been
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far outnumbered that of youngsters in almost every major country. Given
this
 information, the wellbeings of seniors represent the benefit of the whole
society
. Surely there are moral obligations for the
government
 to provide them with a satisfactory public
healthcare
 program in their twilight years, for all the contributions they have made to the development of the country. Regardless of that, due to the lack of
labor
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 force in an
aging
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society
, elder
people
 could extend their
career
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 which in turn benefits the
government
 on that issue; only if they can stay healthy, which could be achieved with the free public
healthcare
 in place. To consider it from another angle, though the economy has been constantly booming in the past few years, the total fortune created has not been distributed evenly. It is the
government
's role to narrow the gap between rich and poor
people
. While the upper class can lie down and enjoy the ocean view from their beach villas, normal
people
 may not be able to afford their
healthcare
. The
government
 must step in to make sure to meet everyone’s most basic needs by putting in place a sound
healthcare
 system. Of
course
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 it is not always a perfect picture.
People
 with
an
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 opposite opinion are concerned that a complimentary
healthcare
 program would impede the application of most cutting-edge medical innovations due to their extravagant cost.
Nevertheless
, it’s suggested that there could be a middle ground where patients who can afford the technology will have
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 option to get the treatment by paying out of their own pocket. In a nutshell, a free-to-all public
healthcare
 program is the best prescription for modern
society
, the positive effects it can bring outweigh all other concerns. Due to its ability to improve senior care and reduce the effects of
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 gap, free-for-all
healthcare
 can be considered to be a good system for any country to implement.
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