Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the living standards of urban

society

have been steadily increasing over the

last

few decades.

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, when it comes to the most fundamental social welfare,

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complimentary

healthcare

, remains

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a frequently debated issue. For the sake of the

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demographics and the expanding gap between rich and poor, I believe it is crucial for the

government

to do its part to ensure that every individual is able to have access to that

healthcare

at no extra cost. According to

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recent

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statistics, the population of seniors has

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far outnumbered that of youngsters in almost every major country. Given

this

information, the wellbeings of seniors represent the benefit of the whole

society

. Surely there are moral obligations for the

government

to provide them with a satisfactory public

healthcare

program in their twilight years, for all the contributions they have made to the development of the country. Regardless of that, due to the lack of

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force in an

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society

, elder

people

could extend their

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which in turn benefits the

government

on that issue; only if they can stay healthy, which could be achieved with the free public

healthcare

in place. To consider it from another angle, though the economy has been constantly booming in the past few years, the total fortune created has not been distributed evenly. It is the

government

's role to narrow the gap between rich and poor

people

. While the upper class can lie down and enjoy the ocean view from their beach villas, normal

people

may not be able to afford their

healthcare

. The

government

must step in to make sure to meet everyone’s most basic needs by putting in place a sound

healthcare

system. Of

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it is not always a perfect picture.

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with

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opposite opinion are concerned that a complimentary

healthcare

program would impede the application of most cutting-edge medical innovations due to their extravagant cost.

Nevertheless

, it’s suggested that there could be a middle ground where patients who can afford the technology will have

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option to get the treatment by paying out of their own pocket. In a nutshell, a free-to-all public

healthcare

program is the best prescription for modern

society

, the positive effects it can bring outweigh all other concerns. Due to its ability to improve senior care and reduce the effects of

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gap, free-for-all

healthcare

can be considered to be a good system for any country to implement.