Solving environmental problems should be a responsibility of an international organisation rather than national government do agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, we
faces
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many times with environmental
problems
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like plastic waste, air pollution
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and so on. It is a consequence
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each people
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earth and solving
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problem
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should begin
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them. I deeply believe that in
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way to
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this
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goal each nation need take responsibility
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themselves
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.
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, we need to define
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the cause
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cause
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causes
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of environmental
problems
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such
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as global warming , erosion and water pollution. As all people know we made
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issues and now we are fighting with them. Every country
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in different metrics.
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, they have different
problems
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with the environment.
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, reducing environmental
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which came out in your territory should be sold to you,
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, China, had
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problem
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a problem
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with water/river pollution, which came from factories waste and China solved
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problem
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by themselves by installing filters. Thanks
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this
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now rivers in countries that border
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China,
not
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are not
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polluted.
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to
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us that we can negatively affect
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our
problem
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to
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other.
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, to
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environmental
problems
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international
organisations
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like United Nations Organisation,
Global
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and Global
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Nest helps
to
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every government solve
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problem
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the problem
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with
environment
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an environment
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which was in their territory because it will be hard to take control
reducing
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issues without helping each nation. The reason is the aim which of the government and
organisations
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are the same and recycling,
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and installing
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billions of items
unreal
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to do one side. International
organisations
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provide people with knowledge that can positively
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on
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their relation to
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nature and
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their surrounding
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surrounding
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surroundings
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, each government need to make opportunities for citizens for taking care of
environment
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the environment
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. In conclusion, solving environmental issues should be the responsibility of each nation with helping international
organisations
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. Only in
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way we can take control
on
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of
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problems
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which happened to nature and everyone must
aware
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be aware
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about
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of
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environmental
condition
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conditions
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.

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