You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

Dear Sowmya, Hope you are in radiant health. I am sorry for not writing a letter to you for

such

a long time as I was completely indulged in my office work for the past 3 months. To be honest, I am exhausted with my present career as it demands me round the clock.

Moreover

, I have been transferred to a remote area due to which I have to travel by bus for 3 hours a day which makes me even more tired. So, I want to switch my profession from an electrical engineer to a data analyst role. As you are already aware that I am having a one-year-old baby,and I need to take care of her due to

this

, I am looking for remote jobs especially, in the data domain. But, there are some hurdles in landing that job as I lack relevant experience in that field.

However

, I have learnt all the required skills and completed a few certification courses. Could you please help me in building my resume and how to approach a hiring manager so that I can reach my goal? I eagerly await your valuable pieces of advice. Warm wishes, Joe.

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8.50

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