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to atmospheric
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so, in order to overcome
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this
issue the
price
of
air
tickets
should be soared which will result in limiting
air
traffic. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and my
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will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
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people
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for travelling internationally not for
within the country. If the
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increases it will
further
become costly for
people
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it is obvious that the person can not go via roadways or railways so the individual must have to
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ticket went up the individual could bear
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Moreover
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people
can reach on time on their desired place. To
, it takes only an hour to
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.
Thus
, the cost of
air
tickets
should not be inclined as it benefits a lot to
people
by saving their time and reaching
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their desired location without much expenditure.
further
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source of
pollution
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. there
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other major sources as well so, why
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blame
air
travel
only for adverse implications? There are other means of transport
also
which proliferates
air
pollutants and indeed
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much over
air
travel
. An article published in New York Times stated that
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pollution
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their country with buses is 43% whereas, through
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is 20%,
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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is twice less than
pollution
caused by buses.
Hence
, the cost of
air
tickets
should not be increased.
To recapitulate,
people
prefer aeroplanes only for voyaging overseas, not for domestic
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which do not expel much
pollution
.
,
air
travel
saves the time of
people
by making them reach
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and comfortably so, from my perspective
priceCorrect article usage
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of
air
tickets
should not be increased because there are other sources of
air
pollution
also
and increasing the
price
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only does not make sense.