Human activities are contributing to climate change. What extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the recent global warming and other

climate

changes are caused by human behaviours. I believe

this

is true from both our daily

lives

point of view as well as

human's

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efforts to expand our territories by destroying nature.

First

, when we looked at our urban daily

lives

, there are numerous phases of our

lives

that are driving global

climate

change.

For example

, by using our private cars for

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, we contribute to

increase

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the level of CO2. The increasing

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amount

anount

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amount

of waste we produce each day

also

help

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increasing

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the carbon level. The more people live in busy city areas, the level of Co2 grows.

In addition

to our daily

lives

, human beings continue our efforts to explore uncultivated areas and daily try to expand our territories.

As a result

, forests are turned into housing lands and seas are becoming holiday beaches.

These endless monetization

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of natural landscapes damages

global

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the global

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ecosystem.

Damaged

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ecosystem influences atmospheric

condition

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which is linked to

the

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global

climate

change. As discussed above, human behaviours in both daily urban life

as well as uncultivated

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, as well as uncultivated area,

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area

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are becoming significant

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to

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global

climate

change. Recent heat

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and

increasing

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number of typhoons are

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typical examples. I believe these are human deed and need some quick

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countermeasures

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counter measures

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before it

become

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too late.