Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, many
people
think studying at a university
abroad offers many advantages for the future while some others believe staying at
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in
home
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the home
country
is better due to challenges
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the challenges
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of
foreign
culture. Add an article
a foreign
This
essay will explain the pros and cons on both sides.
To begin
with, it is understandable that going abroad for
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study
is not an easy thing. Individuals who study abroad have to adapt Add an article
the study
with
a totally different environment Change preposition
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such
as language, weather, and even foods
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In addition
, many international students often feel lonely because their family and friends are located far away at
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from
the
origin Change the word
their
country
. In order to tackle the problems quickly, an individual is suggested to do some Correct your spelling
research
researchs
about the destination Correct your spelling
research
country
then
build Correct word choice
and then
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a connection
connection
with current students at the Fix the agreement mistake
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university
who originated from the same country
. Thus
, It will make it easier to adapt with
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to
new
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the new
situation
during studying abroad.
While there are some difficulties Fix the agreement mistake
situations
on
settling in, studying abroad will bring huge positive impacts on a person’s life. From my perspective, an Individual can access Change preposition
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a
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high quality
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by
especially
in a more developed Add the comma(s)
,especially
country
. Moreover
, international students will meet many people
from around the world. Meeting other people
from other countries can enlarge networking which is beneficial for professional
career or developing a business. Add an article
a professional
For example
, some successful businesspeople from Indonesia have been building their business
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been
started since their Unnecessary verb
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university
times abroad. Hence
, connecting with international people
in
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at
university
will open up new opportunities in the future.
To sum up, studying abroad offers many Correct article usage
the university
benefit
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benefits
such
as supporting future career
. While it is difficult to start, there is always Fix the agreement mistake
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time to prepare and seek Correct article usage
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local
community which has been already abroad.Add an article
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