Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many
people
think studying at a
university
abroad offers many advantages for the future while some others believe staying
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home
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country
is better due to
challenges
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the challenges
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in
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living and studying in
foreign
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a foreign
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culture.
This
essay will explain the pros and cons on both sides.
To begin
with, it is understandable that going abroad
for
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study
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is not an easy thing. Individuals who study abroad have to adapt
with
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a totally different environment
such
as language, weather, and even
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.
In addition
, many international students often feel lonely because their family and friends are located far away
at
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the
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origin
country
. In order to tackle the problems quickly, an individual is suggested to do some
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research
researchs
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research
about the destination
country
then
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and then
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build
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a connection
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connection
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connections
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with current students at the
university
who originated from the same
country
.
Thus
, It will make it easier to adapt
with
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new
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the new
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situation
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during studying abroad. While there are some difficulties
on
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settling in, studying abroad will bring huge positive impacts on a person’s life. From my perspective, an Individual can access
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high quality
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education
from
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studying abroad
especially
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,especially
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in a more developed
country
.
Moreover
, international students will meet many
people
from around the world. Meeting other
people
from other countries can enlarge networking which is beneficial for
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career or developing a business.
For example
, some successful businesspeople from Indonesia have been building their
business
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with other partners from other countries and it has
been
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started since their
university
times abroad.
Hence
, connecting with international
people
in
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university
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the university
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will open up new opportunities in the future. To sum up, studying abroad offers many
benefit
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such
as supporting future
career
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. While it is difficult to start, there is always
a
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time to prepare and seek
for
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assistance and support from
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the local
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community which has been already abroad.
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