A growing concern in today's society is globalization. To my certain knowledge, a number of
people
hold a view that having high wages
jobs
is more noticeable than how much
people
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with their careers.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
opinion and have the opposite idea which is passionate in
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should be
us an important factor while working.
Looking at the argument for the view that
job
satisfaction
is much more remarkable than
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salary
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, it is admitted that some of them prove to be quite strong. In
fact
, the most significant reason is that when
people
work
with their passion, their
work
can be completed more perfectly. One strong argument
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this
case is that some
jobs
require the workers to
work
under
pressure
: to finish it successfully.
therefore
,
people
who have
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in what they are doing can deal with it easily and completely. A
further
. good point worth mentioning here is that the workers can motivate themselves to be better
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.
This
derives from the
fact
that
people
who love what they do,
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can earn more for themselves experience and knowledge to improve their skills in their careers.
For instance
. as designers who have
such
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of interest,
people
always need to have new ideas and use their
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for their
job
,
moreover
, they would read more or leam more from other sources to gain as much as they can.
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supporters of the idea that
job
satisfaction
should be a remarkable reason when choosing where to
work
. They certainly have solid reasons for their own point of view. And obviously, their justifications seem convincing as well. It could be argued that
people
workCorrect pronoun usage
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with high
satisfaction
as their
first
priority can feel less
pressure
while having
hardChange the article
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time in their
job
.
This
is because
people
would feel that the
pressure
they have to face
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is the challenge in their project and it is
also
an opportunity to show out their skills and talents.
Besides
that,
this
opinion may appear reasonable somehow due to the
fact
that when the workers feel less
pressure
in their
job
, they might want to continue their career for a long period. To be specific, if
people
have high wages
jobs
, it means they have to exchange their energy and
work
with lots of
pressure
,
this
leads
people
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, lose their motivation, and
then
quit their careers.
For example
, teachers have to
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with students
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, but not all
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of them are good and if teachers don't love their
job
or
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it, they might get bored or lose their
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for it and quit eventually.
From what has been discussed, I completely agree.
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The opinion claiming that jo how
people
get
satisfaction
, from their
job
is much more noticeable than
jobs
with high
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.
This
stems from the
fact
that
work
with interest and passion, employees can complete their
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high]
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,
they Correct pronoun usage
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motivate themselves to be a better version
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,
work
feel less
pressure
with their
job
and can
work
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a long-term period