A growing concern in today's society is globalization. To my certain knowledge, a number of
hold a view that having high wages
is more noticeable than how much
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with their careers.
, I completely disagree with
opinion and have the opposite idea which is passionate in
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should be
us an important factor while working.
Looking at the argument for the view that
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, it is admitted that some of them prove to be quite strong. In
, the most significant reason is that when
with their passion, their
can be completed more perfectly. One strong argument
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case is that some
require the workers to
under
: to finish it successfully.
,
who have
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in what they are doing can deal with it easily and completely. A
. good point worth mentioning here is that the workers can motivate themselves to be better
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.
derives from the
that
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can earn more for themselves experience and knowledge to improve their skills in their careers.
. as designers who have
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of interest,
always need to have new ideas and use their
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for their
,
, they would read more or leam more from other sources to gain as much as they can.
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supporters of the idea that
should be a remarkable reason when choosing where to
. They certainly have solid reasons for their own point of view. And obviously, their justifications seem convincing as well. It could be argued that
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with high
as their
priority can feel less
while having
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time in their
.
is because
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is the challenge in their project and it is
an opportunity to show out their skills and talents.
that,
opinion may appear reasonable somehow due to the
that when the workers feel less
in their
, they might want to continue their career for a long period. To be specific, if
have high wages
, it means they have to exchange their energy and
with lots of
,
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, lose their motivation, and
quit their careers.
, teachers have to
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of them are good and if teachers don't love their
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it, they might get bored or lose their
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for it and quit eventually.
From what has been discussed, I completely agree.
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The opinion claiming that jo how
get
, from their
is much more noticeable than
with high
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.
stems from the
that
with interest and passion, employees can complete their
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,
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motivate themselves to be a better version
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,
feel less
with their
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a long-term period