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A resturant near your house is making a lot of noise. You called the manger but no action was taken. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: *Introduce yourself *Describe the problems you are facing because of this *suggest solutions

#resturant #house #noise #manger #action #manager #*introduce #*describe #*suggest
Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I am living in Acme Heights 2, a society at the back of your restaurant. I am writing
this
 letter as I am having inconvenience due to the noise coming from your place during late night. Actually, I called you
last
 week and explained my concern. You said that you'll take care of
this
. But unfortunately, there has been no action taken from your side. Actually, I have a little daughter who gets disturbed by loud noises from your side. She is not able to sleep properly.
Moreover
, I am working in MNC, so sometimes I have to attend meetings at night and due to unwanted noises from your place, I find myself in a very bad position. So, please I request you to kindly use noise proof window panes in your restaurant, by
this
 way you can
also
 entertain your customer and we'll
also
 not face any issues. I hope you'll take appropriate action immediately and take my suggestions on a positive note. Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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