Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the

environment

is a huge

issue

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world. individuals think that looking after the environmental problem accountability of

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departments. Others think that it is

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responsible

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society. In

this

should discuss both sides and give your personal point of view.

To begin

with,

people

think that it is the

responsibility

of the

government

to take

care

of the

environment

.The

government appointed

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the worker only

focus

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on the

environment

.

In other words

,

government

call an expert to take

care

of

environmental

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the environmental

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issue

and give jobs to

people

.

For instance

, In Pakistan,

government

provide 500 workers

are

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only for

environmental

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issue

and sorting them out.

Moreover

,

people

believe that

Government

has a

responsibility

on their

shoulder

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to take

care

environment

.

Government

give huge funds to manage environmental problems.

In other words

,

government

provide a large of money for an environmental

issue

.

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, In

a foreign countries

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,

they

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provide

a big amounts

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of funds for

an

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environmental issues.

On the other hand

,

people

believe that it is part of residents to take

care

of the

environment

.

people

can do recycling

such

plastic bottles, paper and glasses.

In other words

, it brings a big difference in the

environment

society if

people

start recycling their thing rather than throwing them on the streets.

For example

, In England, 85 % of

people

do recycling of their glass, paper and bottle in

differently

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thing. which they can use in their daily life.

Furthermore

, It is the

responsible

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of citizens to take of the

environment

. they stop using vehicles which cause harmful

of

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the

environment

.

people

can use cars but avoid driving cars which

causes

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harmful pollution in the

environment

. To sum up, some

people

think it is the

responsibility

of the

government

to take

care

of the

environment

. other whilst,

believe

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that it is part of citizens to take

care

of the

environment

. In my opinion, It is

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responsibility

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for

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the

government

to look after the environmental aspect. because they can give funds and appoint workers who only work for

an

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environmental issues.