During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. . Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, . remind him when and where you met . tell him what kind of job you are interested in

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Dear Rajesh, My name is Niranjan. We met a few days back on a plane and discussed your business.

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, I completed my post-graduation in hotel management at Lovely University a few months back, and I have been looking for an opportunity to showcase my skills. I am interested in working at the managerial level as I can show my ability. I have worked at one of the best hotels in Mumbai for four months as part of an internship at the college. There the management allowed me to participate in top-level meetings, and they used to listen to my perception and implemented a few of my suggestions in their business. I have received a lot of appreciation from the higher management, and they released an offer letter with an excellent package to me after my course.

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, after discussing it with you, I have decided to work at one of your hotels to show my capability and be part of your restaurant's success. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

169 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

chain of restaurants
potential job opportunity
relevant experience
managerial role
customer service
qualifications
certifications
unique skills
eagerness
admiration
resume
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face-to-face meeting

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