You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter Describe the problem with the jacket. Explain what happened when you tried to return it. Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter to explain my sadness about the jacket which I just bought from your store. I have an issue with
this
jacket. When I am at home, I was trying to take the price tag off. Until I noticed a hole at the backside bottom.
Moreover
, when I was at the store, I did not review it as clearly. It is a bit hole not that big like an ant bit on it. Other conditions are quite good. There is
the
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only one problem that I am concerned
.
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Is it possible to return
this
jacket to your stone ? The bag and price tag are still where they are,
Also
the recipe is still in the bag. So, I could send it back to your stone if you let me return it. I am sure that you will take
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responsibility to solve your customer's problem. Yours sincerely, Suwatchai Srisarakham
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