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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Nowadays,
people
 are more willing to visit unusual
places
 around the world. They are thirsty
of
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 new,
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unforgettable
unforgetable
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unforgettable
 experiences,
therefore
, they choose
also
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quite
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quiet
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 odd locations. I will try to illustrate
advantages
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 and disadvantages of those choices.
Firstly
, I believe that
traveling
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 to deserts or extremely cold spots can be really thrilling.
People
 in
21th
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 century are able to easily see any country they want. By choosing
places
 that are not obvious, they can gain amazing memories,
unique
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and unique
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 ones. Those memories will remain,
that is
 something you cannot buy or
loose
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.
Moreover
, visiting
places
 mentioned before,
people
 can find themselves in difficult conditions.
In
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result
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, they can challenge themselves and find out, if they would be able to survive. As far as I can tell, there are some disadvantages as well.
For instance
, let's imagine that someone is not healthy or strong enough to manage the
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climate
climat
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climate
. It can result in serious illnesses or even death. Choosing
such
 areas might be really dangerous,
it
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 can lead to life jeopardy. Personally, I think that, before you decide to take part in a journey that can cause any harm to your health you should prepare yourself and run some tests to minimalise the risk.
Secondly
, those
places
 are mostly situated far away from cities,
consequently
, those visits could be simply
inconvienient
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inconvenient
.
People
 would have to supply themselves with a huge amount of food, drinks and clothes as well
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 because there are no stores available around. To sum up, there are pluses and minuses of visiting
places
, where conditions are extreme. Regardless of
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decision
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decison
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decision
,
people
 should be aware of them and prepare themselves for
possible
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journey
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journeys
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 by testing their
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strength
strenght
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strengths
 and
do
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doing
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 some research in order to gain fantastic memories.
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