You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter ● describe the problem with the equipment ● explain what happened when you phoned the shop ● say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the dishwasher which I have bought

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week on Monday from the Zayed branch.

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I have heard a lot about the good reputation of your shop, unfortunately, I had a bad experience. To illustrate

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, After the instalment of the new dishwasher which I have bought, I discovered that it is not working and I faced a leak in the water and

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makes a diverse effect on my home and my furniture.

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, I called the call centre system and one of your employees told me that he will call the malfunctions sector and will respond to me after 24 hours. After waiting for 48 hours, I had to call them again, as they did not give me any attention, and they told me that there is nothing to do and they cannot replace the dishwasher, because I have signed on the delivery paper.

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, I have decided to talk to you personally, as I got frustrated because of

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experience and I really did not anticipate

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attitude from a big company like yours.

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, I asked you to replace

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machine or to give me a full refund, as well as I want your company to compensate me for the damage which happened to my home. Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to

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matter, and I am waiting for your response. Yours faithfully,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

243 words

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