you work in an international company and want to request some time off to attend a family event.write a letter to your manager -ask for time off describe the event how will you make up the time

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Dear Mr Samsons, Manager of the delivery department I am writing a letting to request my day off for a week it will start on 1st November to 7th November. As

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my brother's marriage will be held on the date I mentioned above. Unfortunately, my dad is out of town so I am the only person who is in a chance to be on

this

occasion.

Moreover

, My relatives and my family are already at the venue.

Also

, The ceremony is taking place at Maha Sarakham, which I have to take a day for travel. As

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I know it is difficult to accept my request but Mr Chattarin, my co-worker, is willing to work on my schedule.

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, I will make up the time by working on extra time for 5 days since I am back to join duty. Kindly do needful and hoping to hear from you. Thank you, Very truly yours, Suwatchai Srisarakham

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The Closing

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Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

155 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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you work in an international company and want to request some time off to attend a family event.write a letter to your manager -ask for time off describe the event how will you make up the time

The Closing

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