Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

The

salary

affects our everyday life profoundly.

However

, the aspect of being happy with our

job

is

also

important. With all due respect to the people who prefer doing a

job

that answers their personal ambitions, from my perspective, the

salary

is definitely way ahead in terms of importance than

this

. Below, I will demonstrate and substantiate my position in two parts.

Firstly

, I strongly disagree with one of the most viral phrases that “money cannot buy happiness”. Actually, in most

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cases, it can. Every aspect of our life is somewhat connected to money, we are required to pay for utilities, accommodation,

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, as well as purchase necessary commodities for various needs. Apart from that, we simply cannot survive without sufficient funds for food, water or clothes.

Thus

, it is clear that with

big

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salary

, people are able to afford plenty of basic needs and in many cases even go

further

beyond that.

Secondly

, having a sufficient amount of income would enable us to help family and friends.

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of people struggle to cover their own expenses solely. While, individuals who have big salaries are able to act generously and pay for family members’ education fees, as well as,

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to explore different fields of their interest.

This

is especially evident in large families where young siblings are not able to fund themselves and often need

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from senior members of the family.

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having a chance to spend money for your pleasure, large salaries

are often spend

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for the greater good. In conclusion, having a decent

salary

would outweigh the

job

satisfaction aspect. On the one hand, money can bring satisfaction and stability in our lives as it grants us

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to live without fear of not having

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to cover basic needs.

On the other hand

, finances can be a source of happiness

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others,

such

as family members, loved ones and those who need help in general.

Consequently

, I agree with the statement about the importance of

salary

over

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job

satisfaction.